Monday, December 3, 2012

Social Networking Final Paper








Social Networking







The popularity of social networking is increasing hand in hand with information technology.  This is especially true with young adults, ages 18 through 25.  Ever since the invention of smart phones and other media devices, social networking has become a way for individuals to connect with the world that surrounds them.  Now more than ever, we are able to perform tasks such as check in with others in our lives or update ourselves on current events on the go.  But as people rely more and more on communicating through means of vices such as Facebook or Twitter, is this craze the foundation for mental, physical and social health problems?



The basis for building or maintaining a relationship stems from communication.  Throughout mankind this has been primarily done by face to face verbal communication.  Today there is a trend making this less common.  Now instead of being in the physical presence of somebody, young adults will often use their computer or phone to long into social networks and converse using back and forth messaging.  Though  many see this as going along with the times; a natural human adaptation to the evolving world, many people see this resulting in a lack of mental ability for this generation and those to follow.  Sam Laird gives a statistic that “worldwide, facebook users spend 10.5 billion minutes each day surfing the site-and that doesn’t even include mobile use, according to the company’s IPO filing.”  This paints a picture of countless hours spent communicating online that would otherwise be spent face to face. Ultimately, this can deprive people of skills necessary for this type of personal relationship. 



Being able to speak in the presence of others is a skill that is underappreciated by young adults.  Many factors are present in this environment that cannot be replicated by any other means.  Eye contact and facial expressions are very key aspects of communication that is impossible to perceive with online messaging.  With our reliances on social networking, is the importance of these skills eventually going to vanish?  This is a key argument as to how Facebook and Twitter, along with other sites, can limit our mental capabilities.

I personally experience these limitations on a daily basis.  Living with friends as roommates, I have come to notice that most communication between myself and them is limited with their reluctance to put down their cell phones.  It is almost as if I am fighting for their focus, as they choose to be distracted by Twitter.  This says something about the control social networking can have over young adults.
Another issue this generation is facing has to do with keeping up with current events.  Newspapers are hardly being used to collect information now compared to the past.  Most of the stories and advertisements are exposed to us by using social networking sites.  Although most social networking sites are free to register, the revenues they are projected to create for 2013 $10 billion (Frazier).  This may provide economic stimulation, but it takes away the freedom of information selectivity that we are exposed to.  Without the availability of current events and advertisements of our choice, social networking companies provide the exposure as they choose.

Ultimately, this leads to the controversial issue of privacy.  The same information that may be perceived as private to an individual, may be considered public information to a social  media company.  Even if share settings are made extremely private, these companies are constantly updating, making policy changes.  Unless you are constantly keeping up with these changes, personal information can be easily made public for other individuals or corporations (Frazier).


The use of algorithms by entities associated with social networking has added to the privacy concern.  By using these algorithms, companies are able to pinpoint an individual’s interests, personality, sexual orientation, and even the location of where the person lives.  People have argued that this technology could be beneficial from allowing them to  match us up with other people we may share common interests with, or even predicting depression indicators that can aid with suicide prevention (Giles 40-43).  But where does this cross the line?  How much trust can we really place in the hands of these outside corporations whose ultimate goal is to turn a profit?

All of this said, it is becoming evident that the only way to completely restrict the access of this online, is to avoid putting any snippet of personal information online.  Social networking is taking away the power of choice we have as far as information sharing.

One counter argument to the destructivity that social networking has had is the recent impact of young adults with the 2012 presidential elections.  Political figures have relied on social networking to gain the support of young voters, that has otherwise been lacking in recent elections.  This election, President Obama used the popular networking site “reddit”, to host online back and forth communication with the users.  This gave  him a popularity advantage over his competitors (Price).  This type of advantage may even become powerful enough to sway voters in local and national elections.  However, this type of communication replaced what was in place beforehand, and poses similar privacy and biased media exposures associated with all social networking.


On social networking sites, people can tend to have a false sense of confidence that they otherwise would not possess in face to face interactions.  An example of how this can be a problem is cyber-bullying.  This is very different than typical schoolyard bullying, but can be equally as devastating.  The anonymity that can easily be provided by Facebook or Twitter allows predators and bullies alike to prey on internet users.  Young adults are vulnerable to this negative attention, not only children.  These kinds of viral attacks can lead to long lasting effects, including suicides.  A survey of social network users reflected that up to 42% have been victims of cyber bullying (Jung).  There is little to do to prevent these kinds of attacks on social network subscribers.

One of the more immediate negative impacts of social networking poses a physical health risk.  My focus is primarily on distracted driving.  Though using social networking does not account for all these deaths, it is a widely accepted concern that it does still play a major role (Hosansky).


It was estimated that in 2010, around 120,000 drivers were distracted by texting or social network use at any given point throughout the day.  This is a statistic that is rising each year as these sites become more populated.  Researchers also suggest that this type of distraction is the equivalent to driving se sites become more popular.  Researchers also suggest this type of distraction is the equivalent to driving at the legal limit for alcohol consumption (Honsansky).  Although there is a lack of hard evidence proving the use of a handheld device is distracting, it is clear that a better driver is one who keeps their eyes on the road instead of on a phone to update an online status.

Ultimately, social networking has it’s place in this new world of information technology.  But I argue that strong caution needs to be taken.  We must not allow social networking to consume us as individuals.  There are mental, physical, and social aspects of life that rely on face to face communication.  Facebook and Twitter may very well serve as means of interaction, but they may also become the source of devastation.























Works Cited
Frazier, Karen. "Negative Impact of Social Networking Sites." LoveToKnow. Love To Know Corp., n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com/Negative_Impact_of_Social_Networking_Sites>. 1. This is an article from the website socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com. 2. I will be using the section regarding privacy with social networking. 3. This will be used in the section of my argument associated with privacy issues
Giles, Jim. "The Oracle of Facebook." New Scientist 214.2862 (2012): 40-43. Academic Search Premier. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. 1. This is an article titled "The Oracle of Facebook" that was published in the "New Scientist" journal. 2. This is a major source for me, I will be using pieces from the entire article. 3. I will be using this article as key argument examples throughout my paper.
Hosansky, David. "Distracted Driving." CQ Researcher Online. CQ Press, 04 May 2012. Web. 01 Nov. 2012. 1. This is an article from CQ Researcher Online database. 2. I will be using the Overview section and the section asking if distracted driving is getting worse. 3. I will use these sections in the latter part of my paper that explains the danger of distracted driving.
Jung, Brian. "The Negative Effect of Social Media on Society and Individuals." Small Business. Demand Media, n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://smallbusiness.chron.com/negative-effect-social-media-society-individuals-27617.html>. 1. This is an article from the website smallbusiness.chron.com. 2. I will use points from each of the short sections. 3. This will serve as supporting statistical evidence throughout my argument.
Laird, Sam. "Is Social Media Destroying Real-World Relationships?" Mashable.com. QuinStreet Inc., 18 June 2012. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://mashable.com/2012/06/14/social-media-real-world-infographic/>. 1. This is an article published on the the website mashable.com. 2. I will be referring to the survey of the effects social media has on individuals. 3. This will be used as supporting evidence in my argument that social media is destructive in face to face interactions.
Price, Tom. "Social Media and Politics." CQ Researcher Online. CQ Press, 12 Oct. 2012. Web. 01 Nov. 2012. 1. This is an article from the online database CQ Researcher. 2. I will be using the Overview, the section on voter's privacy, and the section on close and personal. 3. In my paper, this will be used as a potential counter-argument.







Monday, November 19, 2012

Social Networking Counterclaims


     With the ever-increasing popularity of social networking websites, there have been many arguments claiming that this craze will lead to detrimental effects on young adults. However, there also have been a few counter arguments by individuals and groups that estimate that the benefits of social networking outweigh any negative effects.  I have found a few examples of counterclaims, and why I believe they ultimately do not sway my argument.


1.  Marketing firms have alluded to the fact that although most social networking sites are free to join, they do create revenue through advertising.  Many companies will pay to have their logo plastered on the site itself, or shared as a blog post, status update, or tweet. Karen Frazier states that "global social networking revenues will exceed $10 billion in 2013." This is expected to generate more revenue than produced by print ads, but still comes nowhere close to that of the revenue created through television.  Ultimately, I feel this has more to do with the ever decreasing popularity of print ads such as newspapers and magazines, and less to do with people logging on to social networks to look at advertisements.

2.  Information posted on sites such as Facebook and Twitter is logged, and is compiled into data by algorithms that other websites and phone companies can use to predict patterns of individuals.  This can be used, for example, to compare a group of users' interests and frequented places, to predict whether or not they would have a positive, healthy relationship.  I agree with Giles in his questioning; is this really the kind of privacy we as individuals want (40-43)?  Though its been proposed, not proven, that this kind of data collection could even be used for suicide watch and prevention, there comes a point where privacy takes priority.

3.  Another popular argument as to why social networking is a good thing, is that it can be a strong foothold for positive real life relationships.  Relationships not created by outside databases, but ones that stem from online communication between individuals and among groups.  Sam Laird counters this with a statistic stating, "Worldwide, Facebook users spend 10.5 billion minutes each day surfing the site - and that doesn't even include mobile use, according to the company's IPO filing."   These are critical minutes that people are wasting online, instead of spending strengthening real relationships they already have, or creating new ones outside of the internet (Laird). This coincides with my argument that healthy, real life relationships are created face-to-face, not over the internet.

Works Cited

Frazier, Karen. "Negative Impact of Social Networking Sites." LoveToKnow. Love To Know Corp., n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com/Negative_Impact_of_Social_Networking_Sites>. 1. This is an article from the website socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com. 2. I will be using the section regarding privacy with social networking. 3. This will be used in the section of my argument associated with privacy issues.

Giles, Jim. "The Oracle of Facebook." New Scientist 214.2862 (2012): 40-43. Academic Search Premier. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail?vid=3&hid=28&sid=734558ac-c552-438c-ad58-73f45b1566b5%40sessionmgr15&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=aph&AN=74710978>. 1. This is an article titled "The Oracle of Facebook" that was published in the "New Scientist" journal. 2. This is a major source for me, I will be using pieces from the entire article. 3. I will be using this article as key argument examples throughout my paper.

Laird, Sam. "Is Social Media Destroying Real-World Relationships?" Mashable.com. QuinStreet Inc., 18 June 2012. Web. 06 Nov. 2012. <http://mashable.com/2012/06/14/social-media-real-world-infographic/>. 1. This is an article published on the the website mashable.com. 2. I will be referring to the survey of the effects social media has on individuals. 3. This will be used as supporting evidence in my argument that social media is destructive in face to face interactions.


Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Annotative Bibliography




For the annotative bibliography this week, I have outline the websites and databases I will use to gather information to back my argument.  Below I have provided a link to these sources.





https://0-docs.google.com.library.lanecc.edu/document/d/1QLv81jV2WAbzOrRNxq1PjPa_zUryoZ1q-QC6XeaM4F4/edit

Monday, November 5, 2012

Prospectus


What issue do you plan to address (worded as a one-sentence question)?

     >In what ways has the social media craze in the last five years effected young adults age 18 through 25?

What is your tentative answer to the question?

     >In my opinion, as social media is becoming ever more popular, young adults are experiencing many improvements in communication abilities, but the negative effects have had a much larger effect.

What personal interest or stake do you have in this issue?

     >As a 22-year old college student, I am directly effected by social networking sites every day.  I am a user of sites such as Twitter and Facebook, as well as other networking vices that relay information among peer groups.  I have used these sites as a useful communication between myself and my peers, but I have also seen the negative outcome of the addictions these sites can create.  These websites have become more convenient with the introduction of apps available for downloads on popular smartphones.  This has made Twitter and Facebook a priority for many people in my age group, when they should be used for entertainment or simple communication.

Why is this a controversial issue?

     >This is controversial because so many young adults are developing an addiction; a constant need to have access to the social networking world around them.  There have been studies that lead people to believe this has destructive effects on social well-being, the ability to communicate outside of social networking, and even safety when it comes to things like distracted driving.  The other side of the argument, from the viewpoint of the young adults primarily, is that social networking is nothing more than a fun way to express opinions, harmless conversation, or simple communication.  I feel like there aren't definitions in dispute, other than what possibly might be considered "social networking".  My argument is mainly on the topics of Twitter, Facebook, and other popular sites such as Myspace.

Who is the audience you need to persuade?

     >The audience I am trying to persuade are the people in my peer group.  I am referring to young adults ages 18-25.  These are the people who struggle to find an issue with the over-use of social networking.  I am attempting to get this audience to see that there are potentially negative short-term and long-term effects.

Wednesday, October 10, 2012

The Uprising in Egypt

     The Internet has become a key tool for people of all different backgrounds to group together for a unified cause. This is clearly explained in Hany Rashwan's article on http:www.thelantern.com/opinion/communication-key-to-egypt-s-uprising-1.1978063.  The internet is available for people around the world, removing all restrictions associated with social class or power.  Because of this, the uprising in Egypt was possible.

     The World Wide Web allows people to access and distribute uninterrupted, and unfiltered information.  Tools such as Google, Facebook, and Twitter allow people to group together and share ideas and opinions that are otherwise controlled by a ruler such as a pharaoh in Egypt.  This is a freedom the suppressed people of Egypt had never had before the World Wide Web was made available. What this ultimately does, is take away from the influential power an individual or group has over the masses, and places the importance on a cause itself. This great freedom was the catalyst needed by the people to group together and fight for a democratic cause.

     QUESTION: Do you enjoy the author's approach to the subject? If you appreciate it, what makes it clever?

     RESPONSE: I feel that Rashwan's essay is very effective in portraying an insight to the direction we are heading in this world.  In this day and age, the world is moving closer and closer to the utilization of communication through the internet. The freedom that the World Wide Web provides is a vast improvement from any form we have ever experienced as a world community. Before, any ruler with an inclination to abuse his or her power, has had the ability to influence the decision and voices of the people. Without the worry of persecution or fear of going against the government body, the people now have a vice to express opinions, and gather for causes.  The anonymity of the World Wide Web has and will open up many doors for change in today's global society.

     Rashwan's approach is clever in the sense that he has realized the World Wide Web will be the driving factor for the betterment of the world's issues.  It gives people hope that they would have never thought they would have.  The hope is derived from the freedom to be heard.

Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Truth about lies

Critical thinking can be bettered by examining lies because the more you are able to discect such a topic, the more you can avoid it.  Its good to be able to determine why people tell lies, and what situations provoke them to tell certain types of lies. Not all lies are the same.  In my opinion, there is a difference between telling a friend you'll meet them at the mall in 5 minutes, when you know its going to be atleast 10, and a major food corporation using harmful chemicals to produce their products, and telling the consumers it is completely harmless. This being said, I do believe that honesty is the best policy.  But lies are relative to each individual situation.

Sunday, September 30, 2012

Schobert Summary and Response

Schobert Summary and Response


In an article published in 2005 in The Washington Post, Les Schobert argues that although the Smithsonian Institution is a key part of America, the treatment of Elephants there is sub-par.  Not unlike zoos nationwide, the unnatural conditions of zoo life is creating life threatening health problems for the captive elephant population.  

With concrete ground surfaces and the inability to roam the natural 1,000 square mile range, housed elephants life expectancy is just a fraction of what it could be in the wild.  Some places around the country have made changes for the better, moving the elephants to much more suitable sanctuaries.  Most others, however, refuse to expand their policies, arguing the poor health of their animals is due to natural causes. Schobert is persistent with his belief that zoos across the US need to improve the care of the elephants, or turn them over to a sanctuary.
    I share my argument with Schobert.  I don’t have the years of experience with zoos or the care of elephants as he does, but it is easy for anyone to see that if you take an elephant out of its natural habitat regardless of the situation, it needs to be treated with the utmost care and attention.  Zoos need to create an environment for all animals, not only elephants, that is as close to their natural habitat as possible.  This would hopefully resolve most of the health issues associated with life at a zoo.  I see a problem if an animal’s well-being is sacrificed for the mere purpose of entertainment.  Its more than understandable, however, if an animal cannot fend for itself in the wild due to some circumstance.  This in no way justifies the cruel mistreatment that goes along with an unnatural setting.  I believe people need to see that having the luxury of being able to drive a few hours to see these wonderful creatures at a zoo comes at a cost to the elephants. And changes need to be done.

Introduction



Me


Hello,

     My name is Korey Cheshire.  I am in my 4th year at LCC, and after years of thought I have finally decided what direction I wanted to take with my schooling.  By some luck last year I found myself nested in the classroom of what would end up being one of the most interesting subjects to me.  The instructor was none other than the economics guru himself, Bill Burrows. I had never imagined that I would take so much interest in economics, thinking to myself I would never care about the economy until I was a grumpy old man well into my 50s. However, I was introduced by Bill to a world of importance that has surrounded me my whole life, too young and naive to pay any attention to. 

     Shortly after my second term with Bill, I was hired on as a Member Service Representative at Pentagon Federal Credit Union.  I took this job because it was a way to pay the bills, and it worked well with my school schedule. At the time it was somewhat out of necessity, but lucky for me the banking industry and my new found love for economics go hand-in hand. 

   Just a year ago I had no idea what path I wanted to venture down, but now as I continue with my schooling I see nothing but options in my future.